Bewitching Sinners
Minor Grammar Update
Bewitching Sinners » Devlog
Just some grammar and typo fixes. I'm not a native English speaker and usually hire an editor once the full game is done. So I will slowly but surely, gradually edit the grammar and see my faults as playthroughs or commenters appear.
Special thanks to Faelel for making a playthrough video and making me notice some of my grammar and typo mistakes! > <
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BewitchingSinners-DEMO-pc.zip 730 MB
Jan 08, 2023
BewitchingSinners-DEMO-mac.zip 715 MB
Jan 08, 2023
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Bewitching Sinners
A bewitching otome and BL dating sim
| Status | Released |
| Author | Miss Xero |
| Genre | Visual Novel, Interactive Fiction |
| Tags | Dating Sim, Fantasy, Female Protagonist, LGBT, Narrative, Otome, Romance, Singleplayer, Yaoi |
| Languages | English |
| Accessibility | Subtitles |
More posts
- Chinese Translation Delay + Second DLC Chances18 days ago
- Patch 1.9.6Jun 24, 2024
- Quest Fix and Typo fixJun 13, 2024
- Bug FixMay 17, 2024
- Version 1.4May 06, 2024
- Exe Permanent FixApr 29, 2024
- Minor Typo UpdateApr 24, 2024
- Revision of V 1.2Apr 21, 2024
- QA Thread + Online Guide LinkApr 20, 2024
- Release!Apr 19, 2024
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hello! I loved the game, I am really hooked. I played as the female MC and in many places, there were pronoun errors which I am sure won't happen in the later versions.
All the best! <3
I would also suggest adding more tags to reach a wider audience, "female protagonist, otome" for example.
noted. There's a cap on the number of tags and I generally have a bad visibility luck lolol. But def gonna polish up the pronouns in the full release once my go to editor is available.
hello! I know this is unrelated but how would I get the golden hairpin for a quest? I can’t find it I probably need to look harder but could I get a little hint? 😭
talk to the girl in thw corner of the map in the courtyard, then click the fountain in the courtyard to get the hairpin ^ ^
omg thx i really wanted see what happens if i complete that quest!
If you don’t have a preferred proofreader/editor that you work with for your games, I would love to help you with Bewitching Sinners. I’ve worked as an editor/proofreader for over a decade, so I have credentials I could provide. Please feel free to reach out!
That aside—I really, really enjoyed playing your C.U.P.I.D. demo and can’t wait to play this one. Your art style is amazing! 🥰
Hello, thank you for your offer and comment!
I do have a go to editor, but coincidentally they are not available for this current demo. May I know your rates or website for more info? Thank you! Hope you enjoy this demo!
Absolutely! Here is my site: https://jusbproofreading.com/. Let me know if I can answer any questions or concerns that you have!