Hi, so do you mean for example Palmy's female appearance with he/they pronouns? Hmm coding wise I think I can now (thx to help in the comments) but personally, I just have 1 problem with that. Which is where to put the pronoun option without ruining the flow, as I like the current transition from choosing the gender to the main events. And (after testing) putting it before they wake up from the comic prologue is also awkward. So that's just my issue atm, where can I put it neatly.
hello love the game if I hadnt said it before and I dont know anything about coding so def take my idea with a grain of salt
but maybe when are mom first texts us it can have a pop up for her we can select like
"happy birthday! (son or daughter)" which will then signify mc pronouns? again have no clue if that can be implemented and if it cant you've done a lot to be inclusive so thankyou~
Hmm that might work actually, my other idea was a bug on our message system that made the player have to put in their info again. We'll see ^ ^ Thanks for the idea!
As far as I can tell this is the first game you've made where you can choose between a female and male protag :) I'm sooo appreciative of that! Your art is beautiful and I'm all in for the story! I can't believe it ended at such a pivotal moment. Now all I have to do is wait until September :') lol
Hello, thank you for your kind compliments. This is the second game I made where you can choose protags technically, the first being Amplitude, but it is an old old game now lol
As for R18, for the initial release no. I might add a patch/release a version with it, but only if I reach certain download milestones I think. If not then I will leave it as is.
Hiii! um- sorry for bothering you. I'm absolutely interested in your game, but I can't download the files, I keep downloading the PC files in my android phone so I can send it to my laptop when it's fixed, but it always fails when it reaches 845mbs. Is this bcz I'm not downloading it on my phone?๐ซ How can I fix it :(
That "ending" made me gasp out loud! I literally had to stop and take a moment to process it lolll
Et tu, Brute? Ahhhhh that was divine, I can't wait for more!!!
The art and worldbuilding are absolutely amazing and all of the characters feel so distinct, especially the MC! I'm so excited to see where the story will go (and whether flirting with everyone in a single play-through will have consequences XD)
Good luck, my dear, and don't forget to take care of yourself! ^-^
okay i love this !! was not at all prepared for the "ending" but that made everything so much more interesting. excited to see how this will all turn out and i love all the characters so far. the art is also soooo good and the comic effect in the prologue is awesome <33
I was so happy to find this last night! The drawings are MAGNIFICENT and I loved the whole setting of witches and hot men (did I mention these men are gorgeous? This game literally feels like it was made for me...twinks and hot men...). I admit that I ended up enjoying playing with the male mc more because he is also very handsome lol, and the dialogues were hilarious. The game's writing is very nice because it doesn't tire you but manages to give you the necessary information at the same time. Not to mention the whole interactive map system and quests that I found super interesting and well done! I'll even take a look at your other games because your work really enchanted me haha.
I'm really looking forward to seeing this game come to life! I saw that you plan to post a bigger demo eventually, so I'll be looking forward to it as well!
Got the game because it didn't leave my mind (I don't usually play if there's just the demo) buut I ended up liking it, the art, the idea (plot) and the characters seem very nice. Did I say that I like the art?
I can choose my mc, I like the mc, all good. I just have a weird problem that never happened before. The game keeps stopping, especially if I go into the menu. I gotta tap multiple times until it eventually gets me to the saving screen, just to lag again. And badly. Even in game it still keeps refusing to work properly pretty often. Like not being able to skip dialogue and then skipping a line. I did extract the files and everything, so I am not entirely sure of what to do :") I see that it works for the others, but unless it requires a lot to work properly it shall work on my laptop too :") Vns do work on it. Could it be that the program (unity for example, if the case) doesn't work mine? I heard that this can cause problems.
Anyway, thank you for your work. You started a very beautiful project :)
Hi, thank u for trying the demo despite the lags on ur computer. May I know your device specs? That lag may be due to missing graphic drivers or outdated one since I am using the newest version of renpy to make this and I know renpy lags with those graphic cards issues.
Oh, makes sense. not sure if this is what you meant but at system type there's 64-bit operating system, x64-based processor and at processor; Intel(R) Celeron(R) CPU N2840 @ 2.16GHz 2.16 GHz. The other things are the device name, ram (3.88 usable), IDs and pen and touch.
Sorry for the trouble, I will see what I can do about it. Thank you!
I just finished the demo. It really left me hanging. Looking forward to the full game :)
I think the link below maybe the solution, but I'm not sure. It also could be due to your laptop's ram being on the lower spectrum as I have only tested this game on devices with 8gb ram and above. Still, hope this helps > <
I dunno I someone already posted this- but while playing through as FemPalmier- they kept referring to the knocked out one as Fia's brother. When it should be sister, no? Just thought I should let you know!
Hello, I came to report a bug! So, I've read the side quests guide before playing to craft all the necessary items beforehand but when I met Thane in the dorm at night and offered him my blood vial, MC didnt give it to him and the whole conversation was awkward even though I did have the vial in my inventory.
Oh, right! I didnt code the Blood Potion in because naturally without the guide, no tester nor I, made it beforehand, so I thought I didnt need to code it in. I will code in a safe guard event then so if peiple have it before hand they can give it to Thane.
OMG THIS IS SO AMAZING, I REALLY LOVE YOUR GAME AND WEBTOON TOO ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE FULL VERSION, THANK YOU FOR THIS MASTERPIECE, YOU DID VERY WELL ๐
Hi. Since Im Indonesian, a kickstarter would need an American, UK, Australian or european representative for me to make a kickstarter. And I have to have a credit card.
I did make a Kickstarter for Lingering and that passed but I used my now ex husband's credit card and my family dont use credit cards so its too much hassle for me to make a kickstarter.
I would probably make some goals on my patreon though and see if anyone will donate there. ^ ^
Love the demo!! Defo will come back for more. Minor issue: I picked the lady and at the part of bringing the teacher with Quill to Palmy (?) they start saying "her brother" referring the brother as Palmy. Other than that everything is cool and great, can't wait for future updates <3
this game is great!! the artwork is beautiful, love the writing (super playful and punchy), characters are fun and modern without being corny, worldbuilding is interesting, and i like the gameplay of being able to explore around. my only complaint is the fishing minigame is SUPER hard, at least for me. the indicator moves a little too quickly for me to reliably catch fish
overall, this demo is super impressive especially for being a solo developed game! im excited to see where this goes! wishing you luck on any future development!
i was planning to download the demo just now but the button wasnt working and when i refreshed, there seems to be no way to download the demo? could i ask why? (the game looks damn good btw i love the vibe)
Ah sorry, that's my bad. I hadn't fixed all the pronouns and some grammar. Although I did update the new file with fixes for some of that. Originally, I made the script in all male pronouns as a base and as a result, I'm still missing the right pronouns in some parts > <
I love every character, the lore of the world, and everything about this game <3<3<3<3.
Do you have a twitter or tumblr to ask questions about the game and its characters? Pleaseeee.
It's that I've already formed several theories (I'm probably wrong in all of them lol), for example that the protagonist has a pure soul/heart and that later is important for something magical later in the game...
Although to be honest, in this world the bar is very low for pure hearted people lmao.
Anyway, I love the game so much that I've become your devoted fan for life, I'll be following you<3
my twitter is @ceylon_ent I'm a social media boomer despite being in my 20s lol but I will try to reply any tweets coming in my way.
You are in the right track in terms of their kindness will have an effect on the story but magic or not hmmm debatable.
Also yes everyone's moral in Quill's world is questionable haha. I wanted to make their world more cut-throat and questionable due to the harsh dog-eat-dog mentality between species.
Regarding NSFW, I decided to keep it SFW (I've no talent in drawing pps lol) I will prob have a few 'spicy' moments especially in the witch of greed Arc with it's 'exclusive' club theme and photos of Arshem's and the real Palmier's past on Palmy's phone but they will only topless tops (Male Palmier) /bikinis (Fem Palmier) at most.
I'm glad to know that my theory isnยดt completely wrong XD.
Your comment has made me want to ask you more questions, but I'll hold back and ask you on twitter<3.
And it should be illegal to have such beautiful art and use it to make such sexy characters, AND THEN NOT GIVE US THE NSFW LMAO.
(Don't worry, I like being a drama queen, I'll still like the game whether it has NSFW or not (I'll be thirstier though lol))
By the way, I LOVE ALL THE CHARACTERS, although my favorite for now is Thane (Because she really loved the scene where we give her Palmier blood (ยบ /// ยบ))<3<3<3<3.
Seriously, THANK YOU SO MUCH for making this awesome game (^///^).
P.S.: Will there be a werewolf love interest? Or was that an easter egg to the omegaverse? lmao
Greatly enjoyed the demo, all the characters are interesting and I can't wait to interact with them more. (Arshem my beloved, what was Palmier thinking. XD)
The twist at the end definitely has me intrigued for what comes next.
I have really enjoyed playing the demo! The artwork is gorgeous, and the writing has made me giggle so much. ^.^ the idea of a date system where you can chat, touch or gift is very exciting! Quill has the best lines and even if he is a playboy, he has a chokehold on me so far! Looking forward to the full game!
Thank You so much for making a playthrough, you have a very calming voice if I may add. Also thank you so much as your video helped me notice some of the typos and grammar mistakes I missed, lol^ ^
I am not a native english speaker, so this really helped. I am glad you liked the art n jokes too!
Thank you for watching! Glad I could help with the grammar a bit! I found a few more but I bet you already have them fixed with your update ^.^ I finished playing the demo and wow! I really love all the extra activities we can do! Like fishing, crafting , and quests! I am very invested in the storyline now and looking forward to the full release!
Oh wow! This looks super amazing! I can't wait until the full game is out๐, will you be doing a KS at all? Or just working on this game until it's completed? ๐ Anyways, keep up the great work and can't wait to try this out!
Thank you for your kind comment. I will probably work on this game until its completed and if need any funds for it, I will use money from my patreon. ^ ^
Kickstarter is nice but a bit of a hassle to manage from my country so I prefer to just rely on patreon for now.
Also this project is a solo one, before most funds were used to pay for outside help, usually BGs or monsters. But for this one, the BGs are pretty much covered ^ ^
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Random question, will there be options in the future to play fem presenting but be able to have different pronouns?
Hi, so do you mean for example Palmy's female appearance with he/they pronouns? Hmm coding wise I think I can now (thx to help in the comments) but personally, I just have 1 problem with that. Which is where to put the pronoun option without ruining the flow, as I like the current transition from choosing the gender to the main events. And (after testing) putting it before they wake up from the comic prologue is also awkward. So that's just my issue atm, where can I put it neatly.
hello love the game if I hadnt said it before and I dont know anything about coding so def take my idea with a grain of salt
but maybe when are mom first texts us it can have a pop up for her we can select like
"happy birthday! (son or daughter)" which will then signify mc pronouns? again have no clue if that can be implemented and if it cant you've done a lot to be inclusive so thankyou~
Hmm that might work actually, my other idea was a bug on our message system that made the player have to put in their info again. We'll see ^ ^ Thanks for the idea!
no problem and just to say it again I and everyone else greatly appreciate all your work to telling your interesting stories and characters <3
Update : It is now possible to do this in the demo
Ahhh, thank you! I missed a few days of logging in and missed your first comment I am so sorry that I got caught up with some things. </3
As far as I can tell this is the first game you've made where you can choose between a female and male protag :) I'm sooo appreciative of that! Your art is beautiful and I'm all in for the story! I can't believe it ended at such a pivotal moment. Now all I have to do is wait until September :') lol
Btw will it be 18+ with NSFW scenes? :eyes:
Hello, thank you for your kind compliments. This is the second game I made where you can choose protags technically, the first being Amplitude, but it is an old old game now lol
As for R18, for the initial release no. I might add a patch/release a version with it, but only if I reach certain download milestones I think. If not then I will leave it as is.
Hiii! um- sorry for bothering you. I'm absolutely interested in your game, but I can't download the files, I keep downloading the PC files in my android phone so I can send it to my laptop when it's fixed, but it always fails when it reaches 845mbs. Is this bcz I'm not downloading it on my phone?๐ซ How can I fix it :(
I've updated the file so they are more compressed, can you still not download them?
That "ending" made me gasp out loud! I literally had to stop and take a moment to process it lolll
Et tu, Brute? Ahhhhh that was divine, I can't wait for more!!!
The art and worldbuilding are absolutely amazing and all of the characters feel so distinct, especially the MC! I'm so excited to see where the story will go (and whether flirting with everyone in a single play-through will have consequences XD)
Good luck, my dear, and don't forget to take care of yourself! ^-^
Thank you for ur kind words, glad u liked the demo ^v^
Oh there will be consequences for two timing the voys at least if ur bonds are up to a certain point > <
okay i love this !! was not at all prepared for the "ending" but that made everything so much more interesting. excited to see how this will all turn out and i love all the characters so far. the art is also soooo good and the comic effect in the prologue is awesome <33
AAAAAAAAAAAA This game was so good! When will it be finished? I can't wait to play the full version of this game!
Hopefully in september but if not hopefully January 2024 the latest
Oh! I hope it will be in September coz I was planning to stream the whole story of the game TvT My viewers love the characters very much~
I was so happy to find this last night! The drawings are MAGNIFICENT and I loved the whole setting of witches and hot men (did I mention these men are gorgeous? This game literally feels like it was made for me...twinks and hot men...). I admit that I ended up enjoying playing with the male mc more because he is also very handsome lol, and the dialogues were hilarious. The game's writing is very nice because it doesn't tire you but manages to give you the necessary information at the same time. Not to mention the whole interactive map system and quests that I found super interesting and well done! I'll even take a look at your other games because your work really enchanted me haha.
I'm really looking forward to seeing this game come to life! I saw that you plan to post a bigger demo eventually, so I'll be looking forward to it as well!
LOVE THE TWISTS AND TURNS!
And gawdamn, witches are hot
Hello, opinion and issue(?) report
Got the game because it didn't leave my mind (I don't usually play if there's just the demo) buut I ended up liking it, the art, the idea (plot) and the characters seem very nice. Did I say that I like the art?
I can choose my mc, I like the mc, all good. I just have a weird problem that never happened before. The game keeps stopping, especially if I go into the menu. I gotta tap multiple times until it eventually gets me to the saving screen, just to lag again. And badly. Even in game it still keeps refusing to work properly pretty often. Like not being able to skip dialogue and then skipping a line. I did extract the files and everything, so I am not entirely sure of what to do :") I see that it works for the others, but unless it requires a lot to work properly it shall work on my laptop too :") Vns do work on it. Could it be that the program (unity for example, if the case) doesn't work mine? I heard that this can cause problems.
Anyway, thank you for your work. You started a very beautiful project :)
Hi, thank u for trying the demo despite the lags on ur computer. May I know your device specs? That lag may be due to missing graphic drivers or outdated one since I am using the newest version of renpy to make this and I know renpy lags with those graphic cards issues.
Oh, makes sense. not sure if this is what you meant but at system type there's 64-bit operating system, x64-based processor and at processor; Intel(R) Celeron(R) CPU N2840 @ 2.16GHz 2.16 GHz. The other things are the device name, ram (3.88 usable), IDs and pen and touch.
Sorry for the trouble, I will see what I can do about it. Thank you!
I just finished the demo. It really left me hanging. Looking forward to the full game :)
I think the link below maybe the solution, but I'm not sure. It also could be due to your laptop's ram being on the lower spectrum as I have only tested this game on devices with 8gb ram and above. Still, hope this helps > <
Thank you for playing the demo!!!
https://www.renpy.org/doc/html/display_problems.html
Thank you a lot for your help ^^ The free ram might not be very friendly, I didn't think about it :"))
Thank you too!! :)
I dunno I someone already posted this- but while playing through as FemPalmier- they kept referring to the knocked out one as Fia's brother. When it should be sister, no? Just thought I should let you know!
PS: Love the game- can't wait for more!
Thanks for the info will update this later ^ ^
I just finished doing everything I can, trying to do all the quest and such and I'm in love with this demo, I cannot wait for the full release!
Hello, I came to report a bug! So, I've read the side quests guide before playing to craft all the necessary items beforehand but when I met Thane in the dorm at night and offered him my blood vial, MC didnt give it to him and the whole conversation was awkward even though I did have the vial in my inventory.
Oh, right! I didnt code the Blood Potion in because naturally without the guide, no tester nor I, made it beforehand, so I thought I didnt need to code it in. I will code in a safe guard event then so if peiple have it before hand they can give it to Thane.
Thank you 4 telling me!
Wait...there's a guide? Loved the demo and look forward to seeing how the story your making progresses <3
https://ceylonentertainment.itch.io/bewitching-sinners-visual-novel/devlog/473929/mini-questroutes-guide-suggestions-thread
OMG THIS IS SO AMAZING, I REALLY LOVE YOUR GAME AND WEBTOON TOO ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE FULL VERSION, THANK YOU FOR THIS MASTERPIECE, YOU DID VERY WELL ๐
Hey do you consider starting a kickstarter program? I NEED THE FULL GAME
Hi. Since Im Indonesian, a kickstarter would need an American, UK, Australian or european representative for me to make a kickstarter. And I have to have a credit card.
I did make a Kickstarter for Lingering and that passed but I used my now ex husband's credit card and my family dont use credit cards so its too much hassle for me to make a kickstarter.
I would probably make some goals on my patreon though and see if anyone will donate there. ^ ^
Not gonna play a demo, gonna wait until the full game is out, gonna look for more sexy characters and storys from this developer
SPOILER WARNING:
Love the demo!! Defo will come back for more. Minor issue: I picked the lady and at the part of bringing the teacher with Quill to Palmy (?) they start saying "her brother" referring the brother as Palmy. Other than that everything is cool and great, can't wait for future updates <3
Oh thk u 4 playing the demo n pointing that out!
Very promising demo so far! The writing is a lot of fun and I'm really fascinated by the flower body horror, great stuff!
this is a GREAT game keep up the good work!
I only read the character introductions but I think it will be amazing ๐
What the hell that was amazing?
Iโm excited for more
this game is great!! the artwork is beautiful, love the writing (super playful and punchy), characters are fun and modern without being corny, worldbuilding is interesting, and i like the gameplay of being able to explore around. my only complaint is the fishing minigame is SUPER hard, at least for me. the indicator moves a little too quickly for me to reliably catch fish
overall, this demo is super impressive especially for being a solo developed game! im excited to see where this goes! wishing you luck on any future development!
no android version?
Sorry, no. Android versions are often buggy with the maps gameplay so I dont plan on making an android version
ah okey. ..can i play in joiplay emulator?
You should be able to, yes
thanks for answer
i was planning to download the demo just now but the button wasnt working and when i refreshed, there seems to be no way to download the demo? could i ask why? (the game looks damn good btw i love the vibe)
Ah I was updating the demo, should be available to download now!
Yay
The game is so amazing!!! I love the art and the funny dialogue!!!
Was the original Palmer trans? Because I'm playing a girl but Quill keeps referring to Palmer as a he
Ah sorry, that's my bad. I hadn't fixed all the pronouns and some grammar. Although I did update the new file with fixes for some of that. Originally, I made the script in all male pronouns as a base and as a result, I'm still missing the right pronouns in some parts > <
Don't worry, I played as a guy and sometimes there were she/her pronouns. Probably a couple of mistakes.
Is this SFW? ๐
It's SFW ^ ^
I shall give it a try soon then, thank you. ๐
got excited because the art looks stunning but sad that it seems that you cant name the main character..
Yes, unfortunately I have no intention of making the players able to name the characters.
As I really wanted their names to be a type of bread
i personally prefer named characters cuz im not a fan of self-inserting so ty for this
THIS IS SO FUCKING INTERESTING!!!
I love every character, the lore of the world, and everything about this game <3<3<3<3.
Do you have a twitter or tumblr to ask questions about the game and its characters? Pleaseeee.
It's that I've already formed several theories (I'm probably wrong in all of them lol), for example that the protagonist has a pure soul/heart and that later is important for something magical later in the game...
Although to be honest, in this world the bar is very low for pure hearted people lmao.
Anyway, I love the game so much that I've become your devoted fan for life, I'll be following you<3
P.S: Will it have NSFW? (Pleaseeee)
my twitter is @ceylon_ent I'm a social media boomer despite being in my 20s lol but I will try to reply any tweets coming in my way.
You are in the right track in terms of their kindness will have an effect on the story but magic or not hmmm debatable.
Also yes everyone's moral in Quill's world is questionable haha. I wanted to make their world more cut-throat and questionable due to the harsh dog-eat-dog mentality between species.
Regarding NSFW, I decided to keep it SFW (I've no talent in drawing pps lol) I will prob have a few 'spicy' moments especially in the witch of greed Arc with it's 'exclusive' club theme and photos of Arshem's and the real Palmier's past on Palmy's phone but they will only topless tops (Male Palmier) /bikinis (Fem Palmier) at most.
Thank you very much for answering me so quickly!
I'm glad to know that my theory isnยดt completely wrong XD.
Your comment has made me want to ask you more questions, but I'll hold back and ask you on twitter<3.
And it should be illegal to have such beautiful art and use it to make such sexy characters, AND THEN NOT GIVE US THE NSFW LMAO.
(Don't worry, I like being a drama queen, I'll still like the game whether it has NSFW or not (I'll be thirstier though lol))
By the way, I LOVE ALL THE CHARACTERS, although my favorite for now is Thane (Because she really loved the scene where we give her Palmier blood (ยบ /// ยบ))<3<3<3<3.
Seriously, THANK YOU SO MUCH for making this awesome game (^///^).
P.S.: Will there be a werewolf love interest? Or was that an easter egg to the omegaverse? lmao
omg this was so good???? i enjoyed it so much i'm excited for the release
I haven't been excited for a game in a long time! It looks so good!!!
Fishing/10.
Now time to convince Teach that you can fund his retirement and then some.
Greatly enjoyed the demo, all the characters are interesting and I can't wait to interact with them more. (Arshem my beloved, what was Palmier thinking. XD)
The twist at the end definitely has me intrigued for what comes next.
The whole game is blinding!! Super pretty!!!
love this already! The end threw me for a loop!
Cant wait for the rest of the game lol.
Thank You so much for making a playthrough, you have a very calming voice if I may add. Also thank you so much as your video helped me notice some of the typos and grammar mistakes I missed, lol^ ^
I am not a native english speaker, so this really helped. I am glad you liked the art n jokes too!
Thank you for watching! Glad I could help with the grammar a bit! I found a few more but I bet you already have them fixed with your update ^.^ I finished playing the demo and wow! I really love all the extra activities we can do! Like fishing, crafting , and quests! I am very invested in the storyline now and looking forward to the full release!
Unfortunately once again a wonderful game with no android version and me with a broken laptop. It does look great tho so well done. ๐
So sorry about your laptop!
I never made any android versions yet because of my map/exploring feature is horrid to play on android > <
But I hope your laptop gets fixed soon!
Oh wow! This looks super amazing! I can't wait until the full game is out๐, will you be doing a KS at all? Or just working on this game until it's completed? ๐ Anyways, keep up the great work and can't wait to try this out!
Thank you for your kind comment. I will probably work on this game until its completed and if need any funds for it, I will use money from my patreon. ^ ^
Kickstarter is nice but a bit of a hassle to manage from my country so I prefer to just rely on patreon for now.
Also this project is a solo one, before most funds were used to pay for outside help, usually BGs or monsters. But for this one, the BGs are pretty much covered ^ ^
Sorry to hear KS can be such a hassle๐ข, super happy you'll be working on this amazing game tho, im 100% excited for this, and can't wait! ๐๐
Omg i love your games, but i dont like play demos so i will wait here for full release. And congrats for more one game
Thank you for playing my games! I will def try my best to complete tgis ASAP :)